Hi,
I have just completed critiquing all your brochure roughs.
Glad to see you are all working so hard on this.

I want to remind you to add each of the changes to your Process Book. Save each page as a PDF and reduce the size to place in your book.
This a great way to show your progress as you improve your design.

I have listed below several things that I found to be common in most all the roughs.
Below are the clarifications.